Hello Betony video feedback

Both videos are rebuilt with everything you approved on the samples page: Poppins, the new ticks and gas-mix labels, no cut back to the bar, his mouth closed while he listens, his reply lip-synced, and on the whole call the progress bar, a tick for each check and "Holly is checking her knowledge base" in her pauses.

The two upright videos made from the two-drinks test call. For each one, play it, then go through it beat by beat: tap Working or Not working on each beat and say why in the box. Pause anywhere and use Mark this moment for something at an exact point. Then give the video an overall Keep, Change or Drop.

Keeping the cost down. Most changes cost nothing: cutting, timing, captions, wording, labels, and swapping in a shot we already have (the shot library is at the bottom, and each promo beat has a "use a different shot" choice). Only a brand-new picture costs money: about $0.56 for a 5 second shot, $1.12 for 10 seconds, plus about $0.50 to lip-sync a line he speaks. Every paid change is priced and agreed before it is made, and free changes are tried first.

Everything is saved on this device as you go, so you can stop and come back. Send whenever you like; you can send again later and the newest answers are the ones that count.

The shot library

Every picture already made, free to reuse anywhere in the promo. Talking shots are lip-synced to one of his lines, so they only fit that line. "Mouth" says where he is not talking, which matters while Holly speaks.

Anything else?

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